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Królowa balu.
#1
Królowa balu
Mojej kochanej siostrzyczce



Wśród nudy i jednolitości mody,
Wniosłaś sobą swój blask,
Przy Tobie inne wyglądały jak kłody.
Wraz z sobą wniosłaś na salę blask.
Patrzcie ludzie! Oto Królowa balu!
Patrzcie ludzie! Oto Królowa balu!

Uśmiechem olśniewałaś wszystkich,
Zazdrośnice krzywo się szczerzyły,
Usta składając w uśmiech ohydny.
W swych myślach się zagłębiły.
Patrzcie ludzie! Śmieje się Królowa balu!
Patrzcie ludzie! Śmieje się Królowa balu!

Poruszałaś się z gracją i lekkością,
Dumnie i stanowczo krocząc ku sali
Gdzie zauroczyłaś swą pięknością
Ludzi, którzy tam zachwyceni stali.
Patrzcie ludzie! Idzie Królowa balu!
Patrzcie ludzie! Idzie Królowa balu!

Kamerdyner zapowiedział poloneza,
Ustawiłaś się i błyszczałaś szczerością.
Gdzieś w tłumie dostrzegłaś swego ukochanego,
Spojrzałaś na niego z miłością.
Patrzcie ludzie! Stoi tu Królowa balu!
Patrzcie ludzie! Stoi tu Królowa balu!

Zagrzmiał Moniuszki polonez wspaniały.
Stałem dumny patrząc na Ciebie,
Cieszyłem się, że krew nas łączy.
Za to, żeś mą siostrą Cię wielbię.
Słuchajcie ludzie! Tu się bawi Królowa balu!
Słuchajcie ludzie! Oddajmy cześć Królowej balu!



Wiersz ten napisałem specjalnie dla mojej siostry, która w tym roku zdaje maturę i kilka dni temu miała studniówkę. Tak jak ją spostrzegałem tak opisałem Big Grin.
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#2
Wiersz moze nie jest jeszcze doskonaly, ale siostra na pewno. Gratuluje Ci!
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#3
Wiersza czy siostry? Wink
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#4
HA! Wiesz... nie ma rzeczy doskonałych, ale można je ulepszać! Apropo ann- chodzi mi o to że jak moją siostrę spostrzegałem, tak ją opisałem... logiczne nie??? :wink: dzięki!

PS. Wiem, że wiersz nie jest doskonały.... Smile
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#5
Seth - wiem. Pytałam zbycha, czy gratuluje Ci wiersza, czy siostry Wink
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#6
Ann - siostry, siostry! No moze jeszcze potegi braterskiej milosci do siostry.

Seth - wiersz nie jest doskonaly, ale masz duzo czasu przed soba na ulepszanie jego albo lepiej nastepnych. Z pewnoscia ktoregos wiersza bede mogl Ci w przyszlosci pogratulowac równie szczerze jak siostry.

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#7
Ann - Heheh! Nie zajażyłem Tongue TongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongueTongue! Dzięki zbychu!
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#8
Fakt....
Jak czytam ten wiersz po Twoim komentarzu o okolicznościach powstawania tegoż to w rzeczy samej nie jest dla mnie już ważna ta forma (być może niedoskonała...) tylko czytam to tak:

"Kocham moją siostrę
Kocham moją siostrę..."

Być może zbyt emocjonalnie do tego podchodzę ale tak to już mam że kiedy mogę się identyfikować z podmiotem lirycznym to jakoś mi jasność oceny spada...

Ja już nie będę Ci nic gratulował bo Zbych powie że powtarzam...Wink
Ale siostrze Twojej gratuluję...
Brata...Smile

Pozdrawiam...
Mateo Strunnik
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